Fourth Draft

After uploading this draft, we realised that we made a mistake with some of the clips and their timing. We intend to change these issues as quickly as possible.
When watching this back, we felt like some of the clips went on for too long which reduced how effective this looked as it didn't resemble a conventional music video. After showing this to our teacher. she confirmed our thoughts by telling us that she also felt like some of the clips were too long. She suggested cutting clips, replicating clips and having them consist of forward and reverse play. Me and Sarah both agreed with her and thought her suggestions were useful so we decided to take those on board and begin to change some of the clips. For example, in the clip of myself walking along the beach, we cut the clip into for sections. The first and third section where just played normally and the second and fourth were reversed. We felt like this helped the video become a little more choppy and fast paced which is a typical convention of music videos, especially within the rap genre.